The Club for Adults meet every Tuesday
at 18.30
at 51 Karalya St.
Registration any day before 24.00 on the preceding Monday
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Three groups for children and teenagers ( 9 to 17 years old)
Sundays:
10.00 to 11.30
11.35 to 13.05
13.10 to 14.40
at 4 Amuratarskaya St.
Registered members only.
What to join? Call: +375 29 2592164.
Comments (2)
By Val 12 Mar 2017#
It's an interesting story, Nikita. It made me remember my summer time in the village too. Great days!
My tips:
1. I would recommend that you give it a better title. We can read "Fishing" and "lizard" on the content page, and we do not understand how these words are connected.
2. Remember: use "it" as a pronoun to refer to animals.
3. You should also proofread your text and stop translating from Russian. Remember the phrases you know to express your ideas.
I have corrected other mistakes in my letter. Please, read it and use my tips next time.
The total score for this text is 546 points and you will be awarded an ICAN Winner sticker next time.
Words: 156
Content: 156 х 3 = 468
Language: 156 х 0.5 = 78
Multimedia: 0
Total: 546
By Val 18 Mar 2017#
I have changed your score due to this. As for the text, it is allowed to modify it only BEFORE my feedback.
Words: 156
Content: 156 х 3 = 468
Language: 156 х 0.5 = 78
Multimedia: 110
Total: 646