The Club for Adults meet every Tuesday
at 18.30
at 51 Karalya St.
Registration any day before 24.00 on the preceding Monday
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Three groups for children and teenagers ( 9 to 17 years old)
Sundays:
10.00 to 11.30
11.35 to 13.05
13.10 to 14.40
at 4 Amuratarskaya St.
Registered members only.
What to join? Call: +375 29 2592164.
Comments (1)
By Val 25 Feb 2017#
Thanks for sharing one more of your works. You are obviously gifted and you should continue drawing.
In terms of language your text is accurate enough. In my letter I have suggested a way of saying where you had difficulties. In terms of grammar, remember that a countable singular noun needs a determiner – it might be an article or a possessive pronoun.
Also remember that adverbs (words used to describe a verb) should have –ly: I can draw not badly.
The total score for this text is 596 points and you are awarded an ICAN Winner sticker!
Words: 124
Content: 124 х 3 = 372
Language: 124 х 1 = 124
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