The Club for Adults meet every Tuesday
at 18.30
at 51 Karalya St.
Registration any day before 24.00 on the preceding Monday
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Three groups for children and teenagers ( 9 to 17 years old)
Sundays:
10.00 to 11.30
11.35 to 13.05
13.10 to 14.40
at 4 Amuratarskaya St.
Registered members only.
What to join? Call: +375 29 2592164.
Comments (2)
By Val 28 Sep 2016#
You have written a very nice story. I was reading it with interest, looking forward to learning more about your adventures. And it is pretty accurate too. There are some mistakes, but they are of advanced level. You can be proud of yourself.
My advice is to look at the title. It makes us think that we would read about yachting. But you speak little about it. Instead, you add information about the birthday celebration.
Can you think which title would better fit the content?
Your today's score is:
Words: 178
Content: 178 х 3 = 543
Language: 178 х 1 = 178
Multimedia: 100
Total: 812 points
Well done! And you have time to post another story(ies) before the content is closed.
Happy Writing!
By Ksenia 29 Sep 2016#
Thanks a lot for your comments. Maybe you are right. I think "Birthday party at the Minsk sea" is a better title.
Ksenia