My favorite place in Belarus is the Great Patriotic War museum.I like this place because (I very like history) we can learn a lot of interesting about our history and remember exploits of our ancestors.There are a lot of tanks and aircraft . There are a lot of layouts of war situations.You shoud go to this museum.
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By Val 17 Apr 2017#
It's good to see your text again. Your text is interesting and nearly accurate. However, why is it so short? There are a lot more in the museum to see.
The photo is great, but you miss the target: you should develop your own skills, learn how to take nice pictures of your own.
Anyway,
The total score for this text is 263 points and you will be awarded an ICAN Winner sticker next time, when you write more and use a picture of your own!
Words: 71
Content: 71 х 2 = 142
Language: 71 х 1 = 71
Multimedia: 50
Total: 263 points