This center is very big and on every floor you can find shops of the same category. For example, the 7th floor is a food court with cafes and restaurants. There are two panoramic elevators, but they don’t go to the -1st, where the supermarket Euroopt is situated. If you want to go to Euroopt and other shops, which are on the -1st floor, you should take an escalator.
In Euroopt there is also a café. There you can buy fresh juices and smoozes from fresh fruit and vegetables.
Also the shopping center “Galleria Minsk” has got a parking lot. The parking is opened 24 hours per day. Parking has got 5 floors. On every floor there’re red and green lights. If there aren’t any green lights, it means that there aren’t any free place. There is a tunnel between parking and shopping center.
Shopping center “Galleria Minsk” is very good place to go and buy something. My family lives next door and we use its parking lot and go to groceries. I recommend you to visit it.
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By Val 5 Mar 2017#
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