Only some days ago I was in London. It had been my dream to visit this fantastic city and my dream came true. I had read a lot about the famous sights of London and finally I got to see them. And now I would like to tell you about a museum which totally amazed me.
It was Harry Potter Studio. I can say that I am a big fan of these books. I read all of them and watched all the films, so I was very happy when my mom bought me a ticket.
After a long trip by bus we came to the museum. I had not seen a more interesting place before. I explored a lot of film sets, such as the Ministry of Magic and Diagon Alley, where I kept an eye out for familiar looking shops, for example Gringotts Wizarding Bank and Ollivander’s Wand Shop. I saw incredible costumes and fantastic decorations which were used in all the films. I took a lot of photos at Platform 9¾ and stood next to the original ‘Hogwarts Express’. And of course there was a large gift shop which made me and other Harry Potter’s fans very happy.
There is no pastime better than the Harry Potter Studio tour. There I learned so much about the making of Harry Potter and felt so connected to the characters and stories. Moreover, there were all kinds of fun things to do: riding broom sticks, drinking butter beer and others. It is a truly magical place!
If anyone wants to visit Harry Potter Studio, I promise that it will be the best 3 hours ever!
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By Val 3 Sep 2016#
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