I want to tell a story about my trip to Italy.It was 2 years ago. My family and me with my brother and his family went to Italy on holydays. We drove through such countries: Poland, Germany and Austria. Once at holidays we went to the beach. It was wonderful day. We swam and took the sun a lot. When my family went to hotel, I wanted to stay on the beach. I got losted. I was wery scared and cried. Then a rescue man came up to me and took to a rescue home. Then I saw my dad!!! I was very happy.
This photo was made that evening.
Comments (1)
By Val 15 Feb 2017#
You've written a nice story. Your text is fluent and easy to follow. I was happy to know that it had a happy end. There are several little mistakes in the text, this is why your language multiplier is 1.
You have a nice picture, but it does not fully match the story – you have scored 50 points here.
The total score for this text is 502 points and you are awarded an ICAN Winner sticker!
Words: 113
Content: 113 х 3 = 339
Language: 113 х 1 = 113
Multimedia: 50
Total: 502 points
My recommendations are as follows:
1. The title should match the text.
2. Check the meaning of the words you use: history /story.
3. Remember to use articles.
4. Check the spelling of the words.
5. Check the forms of the verbs.
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