It’s story about my weekend in Minsk-Arena
One week ago my trainer invited me to open short-track World championship. I was agree with this invitation. When I and my team friends opened championship, I saw my classmates on turbine. I was happy because they came to see this championship. When the opening ceremony of championship was ended, I ran to turbines, to my friends. When I came, I say “go to fun zone”. They were agree with this proposal and ran to buy tickets. When they bought tickets, we went to fun zone. It was really fun. There we played curling, tennis, rode bikes and skate. It was really cool and fun!!!
Comments (1)
By Val 16 Feb 2017#
I wish you shared a picture of this place. You could have scored enough to get an ICAN Winner Sticker.
The total score today is 488 points.
Words: 112
Content: 112 х 3 = 336
Language: 112 х 1 = 112
Multimedia: 0
Total: 448 points
Please, mind articles and remember two things:
1. 'to agree' is a verb, so you do not need the verb "to be": I agreed. I didn't agree.
2. Never put "I" in the first place. It's always "M<y friends and I".