It’s interesting story about my cat.
I have a cat. He’s name is Funtik. He is 1 year and 6 month. He has a long tail and mustache, funny name and cute face. When he met with my dog Mister, he scratched my mum and ran away. When he grew, Funtik started attack my dog Mister. Funtik always sleeps with me, but when mum rustles anything, Funtik run away and hide for 1 hour. It is very funny cat, but very harmful. When I saw the film “Inside out”, my cat farted!!! It is very nasty, but I love him very much.
Comments (1)
By Val 16 Feb 2017#
It's a great story! It's interesting to know about your cat. Don't you think that he behaves this way because he is scared and gets defensive?
Your text is easy to follow. You have a talent of telling stories. There are several little mistakes in the text, this is why your language multiplier is 1.
You have attached a picture, but actually the cat is hardly visible, so your score is 50 points here. In your text about the dog the picture is much better – a good example to follow.
The total score for this text is 466 points. Next time, if you write more, or make fewer mistakes or attach a better picture, you are sure to win an ICAN Winner sticker!
Words: 104
Content: 104 х 3 = 312
Language: 101 х 1 = 104
Multimedia: 50
Total: 466 points
And you will get an ICAN Sticker next time when you make a better picture or fewer mistakes. Good luck!