This picture was made in Minsk, in the Minsk Sea, beach №5. This is my favorite place in summer.
I like it because here it is very quiet and always beautiful. There are many trees around the lake. There are many benches to sit and tables. Here you can see the most beautiful sunset.
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By Val 20 Apr 2017#
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