Last summer my family and I were in Turkey.
We stayed at the hotel Utopia world. This hotel consisted of one big building and a lot of small buildings. It stood at a very high hill over the Mediterranean Sea. Territory of the hotel was very big and there were a lot of animals. Near our building lived two nice mountain goats.
These goats were very funny and I fed them grass. They liked me very much. We were there during two weeks and every day they waited for me near our house. For our departure we became the best of friends! It was very sad to leave my new Turkish friends.
Comments (1)
By Val 5 Mar 2017#
You have also demonstrated a good language.
Remember two new rules:
a) In the names, use the proper name, and then the common name: Hilton Hotel (Not: Hotel Hilton). And use "the" before hotels.
b) during + noun; for + number: during holidays, but for two weeks.
Please, read me detailed comments in the file I sent to you.
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