The Club for Adults meet every Tuesday
at 18.30
at 51 Karalya St.
Registration any day before 24.00 on the preceding Monday
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Three groups for children and teenagers ( 9 to 17 years old)
Sundays:
10.00 to 11.30
11.35 to 13.05
13.10 to 14.40
at 4 Amuratarskaya St.
Registered members only.
What to join? Call: +375 29 2592164.
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