This story is about my trip to Mockow on my competition.
One week ago my mum said : son, do you want to go to Moskow with your team and coach? I said: yes, of course. 1 day later my mum woke me up at 5 o’clock AM and we went to Moskow with my coach. At first day in Moskow we were at Red Square and were in Moskow metro. At second day we were on competition. There were distations 500 meters and 300 meters. I was the first on 2 distations. On the way back, we watched a film. After film our team slept. It was very funny trip to Moskow!
Comments (1)
By Val 12 Mar 2017#
As for your text, I would recommend focusing on the topic. It would be more interesting to read more either about your trip to Moscow, or about the competition or both. Besides, tell the readers about the photo.
You should also proofread your text and stop translating from Russian. Remember the phrases you know to express your ideas.
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Words: 113
Content: 113 х 2 = 226
Language: 113 х 0.5 = 56.5
Multimedia: 100
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