It is National Doctors' Day in our country. I know a lot of of physicians. And one of them is so great that I want let you to know him. Evgeniy Kuzmin is working even during this weekend, because he has emergency operations every day. He is an oncosurgeon and one of the best experts in the surgical management of tumors, especially cancerous tumors. Kuzmin specializes in head and neck tumors and works for the National Center of Oncology and Nuclear Medicine. There are few words about him. He visits 7 or 12 new patients every day. Doctor makes operations day by day. Evgeniy was an ordinary surgeon and has changed his specialization because the oncology is more difficult area of work. He never turns off his cell phone.
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By Val 20 Jun 2016#
Thank you for letting us know about Evgeniy Kuzmin. Who knows, maybe knowing this name will save someone's life.
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