I want to show you, where we were yesterday. It was a very interesting trip. We went to Yale Lake which located near Mount Saint Helens in the Washington State. It is very beautiful lake, which located between mounts. Nature here reminded me of the nature in the Ural. There were clear water, rocky shores, forests and fresh air.
We had a boating and wakeboarding. For me it was first attempt for wakeboarding and it was difficult. Nevertheless, it was interesting, I liked it.
Comments (1)
By Val 3 Jul 2016#
Your score is:
Words: 87
Content: 87х3 = 261
Language: 87 х 1= 87
Multimedia: 100
Total: 448 points
My recommendations:
Make all the parts of the text equally developed. You could have described wakeboarding and specified what the main challenge was about it.
Also try making the headline an exact fit of the text.
We are looking forward to your next reports.