Thirty four years ago there was an accident on nuclear power plant in Chernobyl. Many people suffered. The aftermath for habitants of nearby cities, towns and villages, for power plant workers and for nature of that area was terrible. Many people, including my grandfather, took part in overcoming consequences of the disaster.
My grandfather worked at an institution which specialized on monitoring of radioactive contamination in areas that were close to Chernobyl. He and his colleagues went to towns and villages of this area by a special car, which contained all the necessary equipment. They contacted personnel of local hospitals or other similar structures, and when they arrived all the local people knew that they were there. Citizens went to the car, which was usually parked near the hospital, and checked the level of radioactive nuclides in their bodies. If something was wrong, people would get recommendations on what to do to avoid harmful effect of radioactive nuclides.
Also my grandfather and his colleagues monitored the contamination level of forests, especially that of berries and mushrooms in order to prevent local people from poisoning. It turns out that the most safe to eat mushrooms were champignons. Citizens were informed what kinds of mushrooms and berries they should not pick in the forests. One more thing that my grandfather was doing was catching fish in contaminated areas for research. Also he told me that they once went to Chernobyl alienation zone to collect some specimens of water, ground and alluvium.
Even though many years have passed, the large area around Chernobyl is still contaminated with relatively stable radioactive nuclides. Some places in Belarus are still uninhabited. So those activities were and are important, because thanks to people like my grandfather many other people could avoid putting themselves at risk by eating contaminated berries or visiting dangerous places. Now my grandfather is retired, but that institution still works, because the consequences of the catastrophe are still present.
And they will influence our lives for decades.
Comments (1)
By Val 23 May 2020#
You have written an interesting and socially important text. Now, 34 years after the Chernobyl catastrophe, few people remember about the horror of the situation, when we had to live in a life threatening but seemingly safe environment. People also to not realize the scope of the disaster and the heroism and self-sacrifice of people, who were trying to get the situation back to normal. Your grandfather was one of them and it is good that you told us about his role in eliminating the consequences.
You also have uploaded an illustration. I can guess that you painted it yourself. Right? It is recommended that the author should give a brief comment to the illustration.
In terms of language, your text is accurate enough and you have use correct words and appropriate structures. The only comment I would like to make is: remember to use articles. Just mechanically stop at every noun and analyse the use of the article.
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