The Club for Adults meet every Tuesday
at 18.30
at 51 Karalya St.
Registration any day before 24.00 on the preceding Monday
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Three groups for children and teenagers ( 9 to 17 years old)
Sundays:
10.00 to 11.30
11.35 to 13.05
13.10 to 14.40
at 4 Amuratarskaya St.
Registered members only.
What to join? Call: +375 29 2592164.
Comments (1)
By Val 4 Apr 2020#
You have written an important post. I think it would be good for everyone to know this trick and to be safe.
However, I think it would be safer if children and young teenagers would not be out late without trusted adults.
Anyway, the advice is good.
Language:
1)
Maybe, the title of the text should be clearer.
Homecoming = an occasion when someone comes back to their home after a long absence
You need "Coming Home Late at Night"
2)
You should have used the modal verb "should". It is the best if you give recommendations.
3)
Learn how to use punctuation with direct speech correctly:
https://www.lexico.com/grammar/punctuation-in-direct-speech
Next time your story will be perfect.
*****
Your score is 360 points, because your text is a bit too short. You can add another piece of advice and then you will earn an ICAN Winner Sticker.
Words: 65
Content: 65 х 3 = 195
Language: 65 х 1 = 65
Multimedia: 100
Total: 360 points