The Club for Adults meet every Tuesday
at 18.30
at 51 Karalya St.
Registration any day before 24.00 on the preceding Monday
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Three groups for children and teenagers ( 9 to 17 years old)
Sundays:
10.00 to 11.30
11.35 to 13.05
13.10 to 14.40
at 4 Amuratarskaya St.
Registered members only.
What to join? Call: +375 29 2592164.
Comments (2)
By Val 24 Jun 2020#
It was interesting to learn about these unusual animals. But… I wish I knew more about them: more description, where they live, other interesting facts. It would be nice to provide some pictures too. You could borrow some public domain pictures from Wikipedia – you can see the legal choices here:
https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Black-chinned_emperor_tamarin_(S._i._imperator).jpg
It was good of you to create your own picture, but does it match the text?
As for the language, it is accurate, but a bit repetitive.
Your score is 272 points, which is not enough to earn an ICAN Winner Sticker. You can score more in two ways:
1) writing more details
2) choosing relevant pictures.
I will look forward to your new publications.
Words: 74
Content: 74 х 2 = 148
Language: 74 х 1 = 74
Multimedia: 50
Total: 272 points
By Val 24 Jun 2020#