The Club for Adults meet every Tuesday
at 18.30
at 51 Karalya St.
Registration any day before 24.00 on the preceding Monday
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Three groups for children and teenagers ( 9 to 17 years old)
Sundays:
10.00 to 11.30
11.35 to 13.05
13.10 to 14.40
at 4 Amuratarskaya St.
Registered members only.
What to join? Call: +375 29 2592164.
Comments (1)
By Val 24 May 2020#
You have written an interesting and important text. The Chernobyl accident, which was a disaster for our country, should not be forgotten. It should be a lesson of responsibility.
Your text is fluent and easy to understand. However, some mistakes should be corrected:
1. Tenses: If you are writing a story in the past, you should use PAST tenses.
If you switch to the present, like "At the moment", you should use Present Perfect, not Past. Use the table of tenses that I gave to you.
2. Look up the difference between the meanings of "incident" and "accident".
3. Remember the word order: S V O
To improve your writing skills you can do use more input materials. Just read about the subject to harvest the appropriate words.
You could have written these articles
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chernobyl_liquidators
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chernobyl_disaster#Crisis_management
In general, you have good writing skills. Keep practicing. I will look forward to your new posts.
The total score is 592 points. and you are awarded an ICAN WINNER sticker plus one more for being the first during that week.
Words: 164
Content: 164 х 2 = 328
Language: 164 х 1 = 164
Multimedia: 100
Total: 592 points