My favorite place in Minsk is Minsk-Arena. There are track for ride on bikes and rollers,corts for play badminton and tennis. When you hungry, you can go to café and eat hamburger, soup, draniki, ice-cream and a lot of sweets. When I have tutorial, my mum and dad play badminton. When you see a lot of yellow color-it’s my team. :)
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By Val 17 Apr 2017#
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The total score for this text is 275 points and you will be awarded an ICAN Winner sticker next time, when you write more and check grammar better.
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