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Miss Owl and a crown
- By Yana Kriucichina
- Posted Nov 23, 2019
Once upon a time Mr. Brown bear walked in a park. Suddenly he saw a box.
- Oh, what is it? I have to see what’s there in the box!
Mr. Brown bear opened the box and was surprised. There was a crown.
- Its the crown! The real crown! Hm… What is a kind of piece of paper?
It was written on that piece of paper : a crown for the best bear in the world.
- I am the best bear in the world because I can swim!
- What is it? - It said Mr. Panda - What is on your head?
- Oh this is my crown for the best bear in the world!
- You are not the best bear in the world! I am the best bear because I can run! - Said Mr. Panda.
Suddenly they saw Mr. Polar bear. He walked in a park too.
- What is it? What is in your hands? - Sad Mr. Polar bear.
- This is a crown for the best bear in the world. - Said Mr. Panda.
- You are not the best bears in the world! I am the best bear in the world! Because I can catch seals.
- Let’s ask the Miss Owl. - Said Mr. Panda.
At this time Miss Owl read a book.
- What happened bears? Everything is alright?
- Yes, everything is alright! - Said Mr. Brown bear.
- Miss Owl help us we can’t decide who is the best bear in the world.
- Ok. Mr. Brown bear what you can do?
- I can swim, run, climbed a tree, catch fish, swimming and I like honey very much.
- Ok thanks Mr. Brown bear. Mr. Panda what you can do?
- I can run, swim, climbed a tree and I like bamboo most of all.
- Thanks Mr. Panda. Mr. Polar bear what you can do?
- I can run, swim, catch fish and seals, I like meat very much.
- Thanks Mr. Polar bear. How many of you can fly?
- We can’t fly!
- Owl is the best bear in the world! Because we can: fly, swim, catch mouses, saw in the dark!
The end…
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Comments (1)
By Val 1 Dec 2019#
I enjoyed reading this story. You are creative and though about the details! You get a multiplier "3", which allows you to earn 1.131 points for the content. You are the champion!
However, you should also proofread the text. For example, you know the difference between "sad" and "said", don't you?
It is necessary to check the punctuation. You can read about it here.
https://www.ego4u.com/en/cram-up/writing/comma?11
I would also like to see the puppets with the three bears too. Since you have repeated the picture, you can get only 50 points for it.
It feels like your story is unfinished… Would you like to add a strong finish here. What could the owl do with the crown to stop the arguing?
The total score is 1.558 points, and you are awarded an ICAN WINNER sticker plus one more for being the first.
Words: 377
Content: 377 х 3 = 1131
Language: 377 х 1 = 377
Multimedia: 50
Total: 1.558 points