The Club for Adults meet every Tuesday
at 18.30
at 51 Karalya St.
Registration any day before 24.00 on the preceding Monday
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Three groups for children and teenagers ( 9 to 17 years old)
Sundays:
10.00 to 11.30
11.35 to 13.05
13.10 to 14.40
at 4 Amuratarskaya St.
Registered members only.
What to join? Call: +375 29 2592164.
Comments (1)
By Val 1 Dec 2019#
It is your first text in the project. It is good that you have started writing.
It was interesting to read about your trip. It is good to know that you saw so many beautiful places.
Please, read my comments carefully and use them when you will write your next text.
1. Choose a better title.
You entitled your text My holidays in Prague, but you write about different places. So, you should choose a title that would include all of them.
2. When you start a new topic or a new part of the text, start a new paragraph.
3. Read carefully the Help https://writespeakenglish.com/help/how-to-upload-to-community-talk.html
It shows you where to put the main idea of the text, which will appear here
https://writespeakenglish.com/community-talk-c/
It is Step 3, the 2nd field.
Write your text in the next field, which is bigger.
4. When you upload a picture, explain in the text what it is. You wrote " Prague the castle of Hluboka Czech Krumlov the Bastei Nature Reserve Dresden"
It is not clear what we can see.
The total score is 499 points. This is one point less than the score that is needed, but as it is your first text, you will be awarded an ICAN WINNER. We look forward to your next text.
Words: 133
Content: 133 х 2 = 266
Language: 133 х 1 = 133
Multimedia: 100
Total: 499 points