The Club for Adults meet every Tuesday
at 18.30
at 51 Karalya St.
Registration any day before 24.00 on the preceding Monday
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Three groups for children and teenagers ( 9 to 17 years old)
Sundays:
10.00 to 11.30
11.35 to 13.05
13.10 to 14.40
at 4 Amuratarskaya St.
Registered members only.
What to join? Call: +375 29 2592164.
Comments (1)
By Val 1 Dec 2019#
It is your first text in the project. It is good that you have started writing.
It was interesting to read about your school. Please, read my comments carefully. I hope they will help you to write your next text.
1) Develop your ideas, add more descriptions. It will make your text more interesting.
2) When you start a new topic or a new part of the text, start a new paragraph.
3) Check the spelling.
4) Choose a better picture. You are telling about beautiful flower beds and the collection of stones – why not to show them?
The total score is 230 points, and it is not enough to be awarded an ICAN WINNER sticker. I hope next time your text will be longer and the photo will be more suitable.
Words: 60
Content: 60 х 2 = 120
Language: 60 х 1 = 60
Multimedia: 50
Total: 230 points