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Writing for publication will dramatically improve your essays and will get you to the next level of real-life communication. Staying in top three longest will be randomly awarded by ICAN Club's prizes.
Five reasons to develop writing skills:
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5. Writing is fun and boosts creativity.
But ICAN Club will continue its encouragement program.
Young Learners will be awarded a Winner Sticker for each post which scores +500 points
Five Winner Stickers = a prize
Read more here
Adults will be offered a 5 per cent discount to attend a session in ICAN Club for each post + 1500 points.
Read more here
But do not write for prizes. Prizes are just a game to keep you interested and feel appreciated.
Writing for publication will dramatically improve your essays and will get you to the next level of real-life communication. Staying in top three longest will be randomly awarded by ICAN Club's prizes.
Five reasons to develop writing skills:
1. Writing is a powerful tool to develop your career.
2. You can voice your opinion and make a change.
3. Writing helps reflect on your life and make the best of it.
4. We are living in amazing times. Record, document, share!
5. Writing is fun and boosts creativity.
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SWEET WOOL
- By Misha Alhimovich
- Posted Oct 3, 2019
Hello I Misha. Today I’ll tell you how I cook a loot of sweet wool at home, I wonder? go!
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The device for making cotton candy gave me Santa Claus. I was very happy. I have the opportunity to cook cotton candy every day as I want and what taste I want.
You ask and how I will make the taste I want.
I answer: I decided to experiment and throw a place of sugar caramel.
And I got sweet wool with the taste of that caramel and color.
To make sweet wool we need sugar , then we put sugar on the whole*. And waiting . Then there will be sweet wool that we will collect.
Thanks for your attention
SPLEEFY
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The device for making cotton candy gave me Santa Claus. I was very happy. I have the opportunity to cook cotton candy every day as I want and what taste I want.
You ask and how I will make the taste I want.
I answer: I decided to experiment and throw a place of sugar caramel.
And I got sweet wool with the taste of that caramel and color.
To make sweet wool we need sugar , then we put sugar on the whole*. And waiting . Then there will be sweet wool that we will collect.
Thanks for your attention
SPLEEFY
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Comments (1)
By Val 6 Oct 2019#
Thanks for your interesting text. It is good that you attempted to write about something new that we didn't study in the Club. However, we studied grammar, and I would expect you to show that you remember the rules:
1) Use the correct word order : S + V +O
The device for making cotton candy gave me Santa Claus.
2) Check the spelling
3) I am not sure what you mean by " place of sugar caramel"
4) Use the table with tenses to choose the correct tense form of the verb.
5) "Thanks for your attention" is usually said after a presentation, not in the text.
6) It is not clear why you used the lines in your text.
Looking at your picture I could not guess what the text was about. Why not to show the sweet wool in the center?
And it is quite clear to me HOW we can make it. Why not to show the process?
The total score is 526 points. You are awarded an ICAN Winner sticker. Congratulations! But, Misha, this project is not about points and stickers. It is about your writing skills. Next time mind your grammar, please.
Words: 136
Content: 136 х 3 = 408
Language: 136 х 0.5 = 68
Multimedia: 50
Total: 526 points