The Club for Adults meet every Tuesday
at 18.30
at 51 Karalya St.
Registration any day before 24.00 on the preceding Monday
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Three groups for children and teenagers ( 9 to 17 years old)
Sundays:
10.00 to 11.30
11.35 to 13.05
13.10 to 14.40
at 4 Amuratarskaya St.
Registered members only.
What to join? Call: +375 29 2592164.
Comments (1)
By Val 8 Apr 2018#
Thank you also for the emotional pictures, which convey the excitement of the event. And who is that man? He looks like someone important… Why not to mention the name?
Regarding your text, remember that you cannot "jump" between tenses. You are telling a story, which means that you are writing in the past, so use past tenses. If you wish to give general information, give it as one paragraph, or mark it with the words "generally", "usually".
Another rule to bear in mind is the use of articles. Use "a(n)" or zero article (nothing) when you mention something for the first time. In your case the articles were not needed when you used the words "reporter, opponent, reviewer and spectator" for the first time, because these were roles, not people, which means you used them in the category of names, positions and functions. In the sentence, when you introduce yourself for the first time (you are a countable item :-) ), the use of "an" is correct:
"By the way, I was an opponent".
However, when you started describing the procedure, you started speaking about PEOPLE, and they were related. This means that you were not speaking in general, and "the" should have been used.
Also, check your spelling, please.
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